英语厉害的进来~这篇文章有什么错的地方?Have you ever been to Shanghai?If you ha

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英语厉害的进来~

这篇文章有什么错的地方?

Have you ever been to Shanghai?If you haven't,next,I will tell you about of Shanghai.

Shanghai is a beautiful city.It's the biggest cities in China and the eighth biggest cities in the world.The population of Shanghai is about 18 million.

Shanghai is developing quickly .It attracts lots of foreigners from all over the world.Now ,it's a centre of international business and trade.

Shanghai is in the east of China.Huangpu River is its mother river.The weather in Shanghai is warm.And Shanghai is about seven hundred years old.

The Oriental Peal TV is famous in Shanghai.It'sthe tallest in Asia and the third tallest in the world.Many tourists come to visit it every day.

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Have you ever been to Shanghai?Well,if you haven't,then let me tell you about Shanghai.

Shanghai is a beautiful city.With a total population of about 18 million,Shanghai is one of the biggest cities in China and also the eighth largest city in the world.

Shanghai is developing at an unprecedented pace.It has attracted lots of foreigners worldwide.Today,it is a hub of international business and trade.

Shanghai is located in the east of China.Huangpu River is its mother river.Shanghai has four seasons.Currently,it is summertime and the weather is warm.Shanghai has a long history of seven hundred years.

The Oriental Peal TV in Shanghai is a famous tourist attraction.Many tourists come to visit it every day.It is the tallest in Asia and the third tallest in the world.

Shanghai is my home and it will always be.I am proud of you,Shanghai!

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