英语厉害的进来!这篇文章哪些地方有错,Beijing is a big city .It's the capital o
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英语厉害的进来!
这篇文章哪些地方有错,
Beijing is a big city .It's the capital of China and it's an ancient capital.
Beijing is the oldest city in China.It's about 3 thousand years old.It's in the east of China.The popoulation of Beijing is about 17 million.It's the seconed biggest cities in China.Beijing is a good place to visit.It's famous for the Great Wall and the Forbidden City.Now Beijing is becoming a modern and imternational city.
This year is 2008.The 29th Olympic Games will be held in Beijing in August.And the weather in beijing will be hot in August.
结尾用什么好呢?
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Beijing is a big city .It's the capital of China and it's an capital city with a long history.
(ancient表示"远古的,古代的",而北京现在依然是首都,所以在这里应该用"历史悠久的")
Beijing is one of the oldest cities in China.
(北京并不是唯一的历史最悠久的城市,只是其中之一,这样才符合历史事实.)
Beijing has about 3000-year history.
(这样才是地道的英语表达)
It's in the north part of China.
(北京是在北方,不是东方)
The popoulation of Beijing is about 17 million.It's the second largest population in China.
(前文说北京是最大城市之一,这里说是第二大,逻辑不好,改成就人口来说,是第二大比较好.)
Beijing is a good place to visit.It's famous for the Great Wall and the Forbidden City.Beijing is both a modern and an international city.
(北京早已经是现代和国际城市,不是"is becoming".)
Now it is year of 2008.The 29th Olympic Games will be held in Beijing in August.Although the weather in August will be a little hot,it's attractive anyway.
(This year is 2008.典型的中式英语.已修改.八月的天气虽然比较热,但是还要提出其长处,不能只说热就完了.修改后的句子意思是"八月的天气有点热,尽管如此,北京还是一样迷人")
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