英语达人进来帮忙请到手帮我检查纠正,先谢谢了~hello boys and girls,I‘m happy I have

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请到手帮我检查纠正,先谢谢了~

hello boys and girls,I‘m happy I have this chance to practise my spoken English.

Today,l want to talk about a boy.I call him bunny,just like a rabbit.He was my intimate friend.we were always had heart-to-heart talks.We were always shared happiness and sorrow.

He was impressed with SuShi.He could wrote poems by himself.My Chinese was very poor. He taught me how to write the composition can get a high mark.I considered he was talented,but once he called me 'vegetable bird' by English.Since then I always laughed at his Chinglish.

I got along well with him.But once we had a fight.From then on we out of touch with each other. We lost touch for half a year up to now.I miss him so much.Friendship is as important as family love. I hope I can find him one day.I hope we are friends as before.

That's all,thank you.

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hello boys and girls,I‘m happy 【that】I have this chance to practise my spoken English.

Today,l want to talk about a boy.I call him bunny,just like a rabbit.He was my intimate friend.we 【删掉were】 always had heart-to-heart talks.We 【删掉were】 always shared happiness and sorrow.

He was impressed 【with此处最好用on】 SuShi.He could 【wrote】（could后加动词原形,所以用write） poems by himself.My Chinese was very poor.He taught me how to write the composition 【这里是定语从句】（应该为）+that I can get high marks.I considered he was talented,but once he called me 'vegetable bird' by【这里介词应用in】 English.Since then I 【+was】表被动always laughed at his Chinglish.

I got along well with him.But once we had a fight.From then on we 【were】out of touch with each other.We 【have】lost touch for half a year up to now.I miss him so much.Friendship is as important as family love.I hope I can find him one day.I hope we are friends as before.

That's all,thank you.

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