帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有哪里错今天考试我写的帮我看看要看仔细看看有没有地方写错

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帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有哪里错今天考试我写的帮我看看要看仔细看看有没有地方写错

I have a pen pal.His name is Bob.He is a good boy.And he is 14 years old.He comes from Australia.He can speak English.There are three people in his famliy.They are his father,his mother and him.It is a sunny day.HIs favorite subject is English.Because it is interesting.He likes apples.Next,he likes playing basketball best.After school,he susally plays basketball at school.Last,he wants to be an actor.He thinks it is exciting job.I love my pen pal.

优质解答：

1."They are his father,his mother and him.”这一句话是不对的,句子中的主语要一致,所以应把"him"改为"he".

2.susally改为usually,意为“通常”（这个可能是你打字的时候出了小错）

3.Next, he likes playing basketball best .这句话是正确的

He thinks it is exciting job.这句话也是正确的

（其他的人的回答有错误）

4.He thinks it is exciting job.句中的 exciting job前面要加冠词an,因为exciting开头的e是含有元音音素的字母.

exciting job给你提一个建议：在描写一个人时,最好不要用“first...next.last"这些连词.

还有"It is a sunny day"与上下文不连贯,要删去.

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