英语 帮我看下这篇作文有没有语法错误

首页/题库/378℃/2022-11-30 00:00:37

英语 帮我看下这篇作文有没有语法错误

I am a very introverted girl.I like many things,for example,newspaper cutting

,origami,but I like best is drawing,drawing cartoon,my favorite feeling is when there is a comic book character from my hand was born sense of achievement,how it feels like I'm a real cartoonist.

My father was a shipbuilding workers，now he is live with me.He was very strict

My mother is work in Japan.She is a wonderful cook.I like her dishes very much

I 'm very happiness in this family

那个 一半是网上找的 一半自己写的····= =有错帮忙挑一下····还有不要把对的改成错的= = 无理取闹的人自行离开= =

优质解答：

有 我来帮你改一下 but what I like best ts drawing which makes me feel like I'm a real cartoonist workers改为worker he is living with me my mother is working in Japan I'm very happy in this family

再问： 那个为什么不能用happiness

再答： 本句表情态 只能用形容词happy 不能用名词happiness

我来回答修改/报错/举报内容！

猜你喜欢